Do I not give you space?
Sorry, I go back to those days,when I had it a little too much
and nobody..
not even my own self in touch.
I just hope that you are really fine,
and it’s not of those rhetorical lines.
Do I talk a lot ?
Sorry, I go back to that lonely walk,
when the words I uttered,
went completely unheard.
I just hope somebody’s listening to you,
patiently understanding what you went thru.
Are you tired of hearing my past
do you know how dark a shadow it casts,
on my soul?
The tears just roll.
I just hope when you remember your past once in a while ,
it always make you smile.
Yes I still
I go back to those days again
When everything seemed in vain.
Yes I know,
My emotions are a little overdone
But,
I bet I am not the only one.
I am not the only one..
Beautifully written, Tanya
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Thankyou 🌸 🙂
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I felt a sense of longing and quiet acceptance. very well written 🙂
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Thankyou so much 🌸 🙂
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Very welcome 🙂
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This is so heart-wrenching! Beautifully penned!❤😊
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Thankyou so much Riddhima ♥️ 🙂
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Speechless. The Ending was quite depressing but altogether I can see some Revolutionary Lines. Keep up the amazing work.
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Glad ! Thankyou a much 🌸
The ending is definitely sad but it’s comforting too, to know that you are not the only one. There are countless others who have the same emotions…… I thought like this.
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Quite true and thoughtful. Keep up the amazing work.
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Very very very good and true ending
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Thankyou Harry 🙂
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