In a world where everybody is running late
And there is a lot of hate
Let’s all give us a break
And think of what is it. .. for we have put all our time on stake
The silver you earn may not outlast
For the time we have, is our last.
Eventually everything will become a past,
And the things to be explored are vast.
Life gave you a lot of chances,
To take a moment and dance it.
But you kept waiting for that home run
Thinking, that is all you could have done.
Dancing Words 
You have a well constructed poem here with a solid moral message. This is when I think poetry can reach many people!
I can’t wait to see what you come up with next month!
To take the moment and dance it- what wonderful words!
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Thankyou so much for such appreciating words ! .. 😃 I am excited for next month 🤗
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Me too!! It is great to build a writing community.
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The silver you earn may not outlast
For the time we have, is our last….
Love the poem. It is very well penned and conveying a message that “To take a moment and dance it”. Don’t wait for a perfect moment. Life gives you way too many opportunities, make the best of it.
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Yeah ! Also we all have become so busy in fulfilling our big desires that we forget the little moments of happiness that come in our way.. .
Thankyou so much for reading 😃
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Yeah, indeed 😊
You’re welcome and have a miraculous day ahead 💗
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Thankyou and you too🖤😃
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